Once there was a boy call Tom.Tom was very lazy.One day he's father says If you will not be lazy I will buy a bicycle for you.Tom nodded he's head.So he can't be so not lazy.Then he go to find the old women who live in the wood's.The old women give Tom a kind of medicine.When every night before he go to bed he eat the medicine.When he go to school he rushed everything when he do.When he go back home.He's mum said what are you rushing.Tom said I can't control myself.Hi's mum said how can you can't control yourself.Tom said because a women give me a kind of medicine.He's mum bring him to see the women.The women said the spell for a few days later the spell will be broken.
4 comments:
This is a good blog. I think the story is not finished right.. let continue.. I'm excited to see your blog tomorror.. see you..
Your story is very interesting but it is not finish yet so continue your story lah! I hope to see the finish of the story tomorrow!
Thank you everybody.
Great story!! A few things that I think can be improved.
He's mum -- incorrect, should be
his mum
women -- incorrect. Tom went to see only one person, so it should be woman.
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