Once upon a time there was a women that live in a forest.One day she go out to water the flowers.After she water the flowers she go in to her house for a nap.When she go in to her room she heart bong!!!.Then she go out to see what is going on.When she go out she saw a witch is lying down on her garden.After awhile she pull the witch in.Then she go to take her nap.When she is napping the witch woke up.The with go out and shout Lili.Actually Lili is her friend.Then Lili comes.Lili brings the witch home.Then the women woke up.She saw the witch's broom.The women use the broom to sweep the floor.The next morning the women saw that the broom is sweeping by it self.Then her nay boar came and she saw that the broom is sweeping by it self.So every nay boar go to other places to stay.the end
2 comments:
wei, this story you copy my book 1 !!!herh!This is a good story but got a few words wrong spelling example:
nay boar : neighbor
heart : heard
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I like your blog.. you start to look at old story but using your own words. This is the right way.. keep it up... write more article with your own words.. no problem that story is from other book.. but use your own words. good...
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